Monday, 15 February 2016

Volcano Writing

Today we talk about the Christchurch earthquake and how the residents would be feeling after the most recent one. Then we looked at the picture below and imagined ourselves to be observing the volcano.  Our story needed to be descriptive and we used lots of verbs to show how things were moving.

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The beast had awoken bellowing red hot lava out of  it. Smoke smothered the Earth's landscape,  lightning striking like a snake attacking its’ prey. I look over at Mum and just burst into tears, our house was gone, everything we had worked towards was gone. It was all gone!

By Aidan and Morgan

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