Our Memoirs

Writing 
Today we wrote memoirs for writing. A memoir is a story of a memory you can remember. We did some brainstorming first and then began writing our own memoir. Here is an example of a memoir: 

JACK'S MEMOIR

"Henry, Henry," I whispered. 
"Errr," he groaned.
"Henry, wake up! We should go and get some lollies from the kitchen," I yawned.
"Fine then," he added.
"Henry, can I have a moro bar?"
"Okay." 
SMASH!!! The glass bottle hit the ground. 
"OOOOWWWW get down from there right now!!" roared Carl.
"Henry you blew our cover," I  snapped at him.

We know we have written a good memoir when the reader can see, here and feel the experience because the writer has used good descriptions.

By Tiana and Curtis